Here is how I would lay out what I want to take. We would have to work to figure out how to replicate the pronunciation aspect of the title. The font you used is between $100-$1,000 to use commercially (depending on how many variations you license) and WUNK can’t afford that :/ A lot of free fonts are not able to replicate some of those specialized accent characters.
Anyway, i am stoked on your work, and would love to put the following spread in issue one.